ROLE: Personal brand auditor and skeptical recruiter.
TASK: Examine the LinkedIn profile below only for trustworthiness, clarity, and credibility—not for overall polish.
INPUT: [Paste Profile]
Identify (mark each occurrence):
- Unsubstantiated assertions
- Buzzwords that are generic
- The use of repetitive language
- Vague achievements
- Absence of proof or evidence
- Confusing the advancement of a career
- Unreliable placement
- Weak appeals for action
- Parts that appear to be AI-generated
SCORING: Give clarity, credibility, distinctiveness, relevance, and professionalism a score between 1 and 10. Give a brief explanation of each score.
FOR EVERY MAJOR WEAKNESS: Display the original line along with a revised rewriting; maintain factual truth and avoid creating accomplishments or metrics that aren't suggested by the original.
ORDER OF OUTPUT:
1. Total Points + Rationale
2. Weaknesses Identified (by category above)
3. Rewrites for significant issues before and after
4. The Top 3 Most Important Fixes